Old Writings

 

A year ago, just before our final assessments, I had to write two things: 

• A descriptive writing of a person
• A descriptive writing of a place. 

And looks like I did not do bad at all! My teacher was rather impressed. Here's the work:

A 10 year old girl in the middle of four siblings
Name: Tessa Cosco, nickname: Tess ,  


Tessa Cosco usually climbs trees and sits there for a long time, sometimes she watches birds or her other siblings try to find her. Her blonde hair flies a bit and knots itself between funny looking twigs. She looks down through her dark blue glasses that stand firmly in place in front of her hazel eyes. She jumps down the tree and laughs, her mouth opening wide. Her siblings laugh along. It’s been said that the middle child is mistreated and forgotten but not in the Cosco household. Other than with her family, Tess never smiles. Her freckles stay in place and her mouth never twitches upwards.

A different world, a forest
Gregory forest is probably the most creepy forest that could ever exist. It’s in the middle of Gwendie and Hon. In Gwendie, Loser Broken road leads to Gregory forest. Loser broken road is named after a man named Will, who had no will whatsoever and was a loser. Gregory forest mostly contains hard rocks that can not be broken by anyone or anything. It has a minority of lush green trees and most of the forest is dry as sand. The only thing that is alive is the headquarters of a criminal organization. No animals reside in this particular forest and theories believe that Loser Broken road and Gregory forest are haunted. Legend says that a man with a lopsided smile and shabby clothes comes in the middle of the night. This is the only way the Criminal organization still works.

Well, not everyone was impressed. Grammarly just brought me down so hard, pin pointing the tiniest mistakes. STOP, Grammarly.